Very cool! I can see your vision coming through, even if there's inspirations there. The art and animation is very good and striking--I especially love those streaks of neon pink whizzing by in the tunnel. As for critiques, I'd say work on your pacing and scene clarity a bit (the part where the stranger girl gets beat up by the monster almost happens too fast to understand what's happening, esp bc there's a sudden change in medium). Also I think the movie would work WAY better if you cut out all the audio--other than the music. You kind of don't need it! Unless you want to have dialogue in your short, the visuals and camera angles do a good job of telling the story all on their own.